This week I had made a moment in time about the day in Pataua, Whangarei. We had an amazing time and I had swum with dolphins by coincidence. It was yet again a crazy experience with whanau and friends. I have been learning about the stages and I needed to work on stage 6. I realized I need to work on structural features and punctuation marks like colons, semi-colon, dashes and hyphens.
Great to read this story and see you taking risks with dash. I hope you are clear on semi-colon and colon and will work on using them in your next piece of writing. (Your first sentence is not a complete sentence do you realise)
ReplyDeleteI did realise lol... I will fix that up soon.
DeleteLove your story and i like swimming with dolphins
ReplyDeleteI didn´t tbvh but thanks Sarn!
DeleteWow Dalavamayne this is sooo cool just like meeee!!!
ReplyDeleteI must be talking to my mirror lol x
DeleteNgwaa you got to swim with dolphins lucky and i like your story
ReplyDeletethanks ocian! x
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