My Cool As Balanced Diet Argument

In my class, I have been learning about my healthy choices. I have written my own persuasive argument about having a balanced diet. I have used sophisticated punctuation and advanced vocabulary as I should at Stages 5-6. I have also written about disagreeing to eat whenever you want, whenever you want, however you want. I have also tried self-assessing my individual writing. It would've already been posted but yeah!